Just because a book has an intended audience of children or teenagers doesn't mean that it's any less of an accomplishment than a book for an adult. I've made several attempts to write for children--it's much harder than it looks. If only I could produce even one short work of art for kids. That people can write entire novels or sustained works of nonfiction is grounds for admiration. Well-written novels, especially, astound me with characters so life-like that I am compelled to read on to find out what happens to them. Then when the book is over, I miss them and keep thinking that there is more to read when there isn't. The ability to create a book that readers are sorry to finish is a rare gift.
No, I'm not talking about a fantasy tale for kids when I say "magic formula." I'm talking about elements in children's fiction that are guaranteed to win the rapt attention of young children. And some authors are shrewd enough to not only perceive the existence of these elements, but to put them all together in one story.
Long ago I heard someone describing the kinds of stories children like. I remember only one item from that list: children love stories of other children making it on their own, fending for themselves. Did the expert ever get that right. At the time I heard that, my mind flicked to a book I read when I was about eight, one that my friends had read first and that I could hardly wait to get my hands on. It was about a little boy who had put together some robots out of this and that. One night, a terrible storm brought a flood, and lightening struck those robots, bringing them to life. These amusing mechanical people helped the protaganist live on his own after he escaped the flood.
But the really riveting story, the one that I read over and over when I was maybe six and seven, was one about five children who get on the wrong plane and end up traveling with a couple of bad guys who land on a deserted island. Enid Blyton wrote it, I think. The kids manage to hide from the sinister men most of the time. They find a cave behind a waterfall and set up camp. With tins of food and other finds, they make do very well.
The other day at one of my book-buying frenzies at the swap meet, I came upon a familiar book that brilliantly combined the elements of adventure, survival, and another great love of preteen girls: babies. I had given
Baby Island many careful readings about twenty-four years ago, and the book I bought recently for twenty cents is probably the same edition I had then. As a little girl, I was passionate about babies, and
Baby Island spoke to my heart. When the author described protagonist Mary as being "never so happy as when she had borrowed a baby to cuddle or care for" I knew exactly what she was talking about.
The author, by the way, is Carol Ryrie Brink--remember
Caddie Woodlawn? Or
Hans or the Silver Skates? Brink is good. I just finished rereading
Baby Island and enjoyed it again. Copyrighted in 1937, it deserves to be one of Brink's minor children's classics, shadowed, of course, by her major one,
Caddie Woodlawn. The story-telling is decent, the characters are real and humorous tone sustained. And then you have those ingenious plot elements--adventure and infants.
I coveted the protagonists' predicament when I was a little girl. Mary and her younger sister Jean rescue four babies from a sinking ship and end up on a desert island. They survive on tins of food they find in the lifeboat and also coconuts, bananas, breadfruit, clams. They make dishes out of coconut shells and seashells and a tent out of bamboo and tarp. They deal with a baby teething, a tot wandering off, a stranger on their island, and a terrible storm.
But the magic formula isn't really a magic formula, after all. Sigh. I'll prove it. Just let those of us who are not fiction writers go to the keyboard every day for several months and pound out a story for kids with all the great ingredients applied with a liberal hand. Make it a story of survival, make the characters grow up in the end, throw in babies or robots or caves, airplanes, horses, or dolls come to life. I'll wager the results of our hard work wouldn't approach the quality of Brink's deceptively simple story of two girls, four babies, and their very own island.